Talk:Scithrowl/@comment-62.202.221.138-20181004020647

The mountain range is called the Grampains. Sherzal has her seat here, a palace built into the southern most region of the Grampains mountain range where it meets the sea. From Sherzal's palace there is a labyrinth of natrual tunnels carved by water that has either stopped flowing or found a more direct path to sea. Along this network of tunnels, all of which has not been fully explored, directly north of Sherzal's palace are their tenuous neighbors the Noi-gan. Their relationship is more of mutual aid than friendship and indeed Sherzal has a soldiers outpost to protect any possible incursion from the Noi-gan whom themselves have set up traps and guards to protect their territory and capital, the Tetragode. The palace and the Tetragode directly abut each other and to their west is the entirty of Crucical's Empire, to the east is Scithrowl the empire of Adoma the battle queen and, presumably their are more tunnels within the Grampains directly north of the Noi-gan. It mentions in Grey sister that they have only taken what is within their ability to control and maintain. Increasing the territory of the Tetragode does not seem a priority since the Noi-gan are a semi nomadic people moving every 4 years to a new location. This makes them unusual in the Corridor as it has been made mentioned that as the moon continues to fail, the northern and southern ice continue to reach out for one another and as they do, the empires of the corridor, continuously losing territory on those borders, spread out in the only way they can, east and west, in order to continue meeting their needs.

I didnt write this comment for a copy/paste for edit, but rather to provide more information so that someone that does edit can be reminded of a few things when choosing their own words. Apparently I cannot make additions myself, but I appreciate the work you've done here.